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I think this is a really nice piece, and I love the way that you drew his eyes. But the nose looks a little bit out of place. The nose ...


This is a really good piece, and the eyes and hair look really nice. However, the neck is wider than it should be and shadow on the nec...

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I think this is a really nice piece, and I love the way that you drew his eyes. But the nose looks a little bit out of place. The nose alone looks like you're viewing it from above, but the rest of the face looks like your viewing it from the front. You can fix these types of problems if you use a reference. Another thing that I noticed was the hair. While the shading and lighting on the face looks smooth and blended, the way you colored the hair doesn't look blended as well and it looks like you did it quickly. (you can fix this by taking a bit more time on it, and try and blending it more.) The highlights on the hair have the same problem.

I suggest that you take your time on coloring, as that will make your art pieces look a lot better. I also suggest that you practice using references. But besides all that, this art piece looks really nice!
This is a really good piece, and the eyes and hair look really nice. However, the neck is wider than it should be and shadow on the neck is black. ( dont shade with black. use a color that matches the skin tone.) The anatomy needs work, as the shoulders and collar bones look a little off. (for this, I'd recommend a reference. they're very helpful!) You drew the face really well, but I think that you should focus on improving your anatomy. Try doing some anatomy studies, as those would help. Another thing would be the colors. When you shade, try using colors that are a slightly different hue then the original color.(example- if your character has peach-colored skin, use a reddish peach color to shade.) This will make your piece look more dynamic.

I'd recommend that you try to work on your anatomy, and that you focus more on the colors you choose. But the things that you did well- the face and hair- look really nice!
Hi! I'll get straight to the point, I've been struggling with my art lately. I can't really seem to improve in anything, and it takes me forever just to complete one art piece (which is why I don't upload often like most artists do.) I think that some critique on my art would really help me improve in some places. If you can, please give me constructive criticism on things I could improve on. Thank you! :)
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Okay, so lot's of people say that you can't make good art in MS Paint, and while it's not the best art program, it's alright. I know this isn't the best piece, but I think it's good something made on this program. (plus it only took me around 20 minutes, so it's not going to be all that good lol) So to any other artists who see this, I challenge you to try Ms Paint. It's actually a pretty fun art program!
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Hi! I'll get straight to the point, I've been struggling with my art lately. I can't really seem to improve in anything, and it takes me forever just to complete one art piece (which is why I don't upload often like most artists do.) I think that some critique on my art would really help me improve in some places. If you can, please give me constructive criticism on things I could improve on. Thank you! :)

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TheRoyallyPurple Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2017  Hobbyist
Thank you for the watch! o:
I hope you have a rad day!!
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Kolonena Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol no problem! I hope you have a rad day too!!
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AirSketches Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2017  Student
Thank you for the fav! Have a nice day!
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pandadoodled Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for watching me !
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Kolonena Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem, your art is really cute!
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Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hminteristing way to coulor ah thanks for the watch by fhe way :3
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ElzieA19 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thank you for the favs and watch :D :happybounce:
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artisticTaurean Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so so much for the fav and watch! :D
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Kolonena Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol you're welcome! Your art's really cute!!
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